Football Hooligan Script
Scene 1:
Luke: Did you see that bloke giving it the biggen?

Ryan: Yeah i wish i could give him a taste of his own medicine.

Scene 2:
Ghalib: Yeah i see these two blokes now, West Ham geezer coming up to me.

Ryan: Aint it that bloke from the Millwall game?

Luke: Yeah it is lets go have a word.

Ryan: Lets do him in.

Luke: Oi!

(Ghalib turns around)

Ryan: Get him!

Scene 3:
(Ryan and Luke chase Ghalib down the alley way)
(Ryan and Luke then proceed to throw punches at Ghalib until he cant take no more)
Ryan: You done yet son?

Scene 4:
Ryan and Luke: No one messes with the GSE.
(Both shake hands and walk away)

Research and Planning Feedback

There are some very good pieces of high-level analysis evidenced on your blog - but you need to explore in much more detail the journey towards production.  Storyboarding, scripting and evidence of time-management needs to be considered and your journey would benefit from uploading of video-diary entries.  Show the enthusiasm for this production in everything you upload - and there is more to upload from you.